Saturday, January 19, 2013

SPOOKY SATURDAY

Presents...

Neanderthal Protocol, a spine-tingling science fiction novel by talented Charles Suddeth.

After cold-fusion physicist Greg Anderson’s DNA test marks him as Neanderthal, he is forced to live like an animal. Rachel helps him search for the organization trying to destroy him.

BLURB:
Greg Anderson is a physicist working on Project Cold Sun, which will generate electricity via hydrogen fusion. After a DNA test exposes him as a Neanderthal, he lives on the streets like a wild animal. Near death, he meets Rachel Waters.

After Greg’s former boss is murdered, the police blame Greg. She helps Greg search for the killers. Can Rachel and Greg find the people who are trying to destroy Project Cold Sun before the police charge Greg with murder and execute him?

EXCERPT:
Jimmy faced the others. “Greg’s our newest Neanderthal, but he doesn’t know what he’s supposed to do. Let’s teach him the Neanderthal Protocol. I’ll holler out the number. You all call it back to me.”

They sat with no smiling, frowning, or any indication that they were conscious beings.

Jimmy held up his right index finger. “One.”

“Neanderthals are not human,” shouted the group as a chorus.

“Greg, that means you don’t have civil rights and you can’t take people’s jobs or own things.”

Greg nodded.

Jimmy held up two fingers. “Two.”

“Neanderthals are inferior to humans,” they shouted.

“Greg, humans are more intelligent, creative, and capable. Plus we can see and hear better. That’s why we have everything, and you have nothing. But you Neanderthals are strong like horses and crafty like foxes.”

Greg kept his mouth shut.

Jimmy let another finger pop up. “Three.”

“Neanderthals are animals.”

Jimmy pointed to Greg. “You have the same rights as any other animal. Nobody’s allowed to torture or hurt you without cause. You’re forbidden to use fire.”

Greg fought the urge to smart-off.

Jimmy held up four fingers. “Four.”

“Neanderthals are not allowed to interfere with humans.”

Jimmy zoomed into Greg’s face, almost bumping noses. “This means you can’t interfere with humans or enter our buildings without permission or have sex with us.”

Greg backed away from Jimmy as much as he could on the little stool.

Jimmy flashed his open hand around in triumph. “Five.”

“Neanderthals must bow to humans.”

“Greg, I took pity on you and let you get away without bowing. I hope you’re grateful.”

Greg smiled, even though his face was bleeding.

“Everyone bow, so Greg knows how it’s supposed to be done.” Jimmy clapped once.

The entire group stood as one, looked down with bent necks, and remained in that position. Jimmy pointed to Greg. Biting his tongue, Greg bowed, but he wanted nothing except to cold-cock Jimmy.

Jimmy faced the other Neanderthals. “Now, show Greg what you do when you come face to face with humans.”

Still bowing, they knelt. Stiff necks or not, they remained facing the floor as Greg joined them.

Jimmy gestured with both arms. “You may sit down. Greg, you bow to all humans without exception.”

Greg took his stool.

“Six.” Jimmy again used his fingers to tell them the number.

“Neanderthals must address humans as Master.”

Jimmie looked directly at Greg. Panicking, Greg bowed his head.

Jimmie chuckled. “You’re learning. Call all humans Master—kids, men, women, babies, prisoners, handicapped, it doesn’t make any difference.”

“Yes, Master,” Greg muttered.

Jimmie held his arms straight up. “Seven.”

“Neanderthals live at the mercy of humans.”

“Greg, do you understand that? Thousands of years ago Neanderthals lost the war against humans, but we showed you mercy and let you live.”

Greg nodded and prayed that another, “Yes, Master,” was not in order.

“Greg, listen to this last rule. Even if you forget the others, don’t forget this one.” Jimmy raised both arms in exultation. “Eight!”

“The only punishment for Neanderthals is death.”

BUY LINKS:
Musa Publishing
Amazon

Charles Suddeth was born in Indiana, grew up Michigan, and has spent his adult life in Kentucky. He now lives in Louisville with two cats and likes to spend his days hiking and writing in nearby Tom Sawyer State Park. Charles is a graduate of Michigan State University. He belongs to the Society of Children’s Book Writers & Illustrators (SCBWI) and Green River Writers. His first book, Halloween Kentucky Style, was published in 2010.

Learn more about Charles Suddeth on his website. Stay connected on Twitter.

12 comments:

janedougherty said...

This is familiar, I must have been drawn by the blurb while browsing on the Musa site. Shows that an intriguing blurb hooks the readers!

Nancy DiMauro said...

Sounds great. You have to love the mix between science fiction and thriller. Good luck with this Charles. Shared and Tweeted!

susanlodgebooks said...

The excerpt left me wanting to know more. The plot has all the ingredients of a good read . Congratulations Charles.

Patricia said...

What a SUPERB excerpt and premise for a book. Wow. I usually don't read this type of book but the excerpt just reeled me in.
Good luck in your future Charles.
Patti

Rita Monette, Writer said...

Sounds great, Charles. I have the book, and it's on my long 'to read' list. Good luck!!!

Charles said...

I would like to thank everyone for their comments and encouragement. Yes, I did picture it as a thriller crossed with science fiction. It also has tinges of anthropology, many of the scenarios may be possible in the near future.

girlseeksplace said...

I'm intrigued. Definitely adding this to my to-read list. Congratulations, Charles, on your release.

Charles said...

Thanks for coming by.

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Rhea Rhodan said...

Great excerpt! Definitely left me wanting to read more. Wishing you much success!

Charles said...

Rhea,
Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate your visit.

Eleni Konstantine said...

Oooh, this is one for my TBR shelf. Congrats on the release, Charles.